The world is a delicate and new entity;
an earth slowly awakening from frozen slumber
shrugging off the frosty shawl of winter
exposing a once barren land renewed of it's youth.
Spring air is perfume so intoxicating
and sweet that one can't blame hummingbirds or
bumblebees for their lusty pursuit of budding
cherry blossoms and tulips.
Colorado night skies are a little more heavy now
long missed humidity soaks the Front Range while
the oncoming explosion of life, a fragrant scent and
bristling chill, whistles in the wind.
It's my twentieth visit from the season of life
and I meet it with strong emotion, for life is
sweet and constant until a comma, a pause,
a single breath ends what we know.
When will that breath steal me away
from this life? How many more seasons
will I be given? How could I know?
Why would I want to?
All I know is just as surely as Spring came
it will leave once again, giving way to that season
of nostalgia and eventually fading into a
crisp Colorado Autumn.
The world sleeps, regrouping once a again
in the hollow depth of Winter before starting Spring
anew, continuing a cycle that offers to add another year
to my tally for the simple price of living.
So I'll live; life was the only gift ever really given to any of us
and I'll live, confident that comma, that pause,
that last rebel breath knows where to find me
when the final grain has fallen from my hourglass.
When that time comes I'll greet death like an old friend
and walk with the Reaper to the snowy edge of the Winter,
through the forest of the unknown's foggy haze
and into an unfamiliar world to meet another season of life.
You write beautifully. Seriously.
ReplyDeleteI absolutely love the beginning, it reads so smoothly and beautifully you can practically taste it. I get lost in the middle though, if you could find a way to condense it a little bit, make it more potent through those stanzas, I think it could be a masterful piece.
ReplyDeleteThank you Anonymous! And thanks JR, what parts of the piece are you specifically talking about? I know 9 stanzas are a little much, but I couldn't edit out any of my writing because I felt that everything served a purpose.
ReplyDeleteDon't listen to Ramp! Like life I can only want more from you here, Walt!
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